Stay, Ch 34-38

I really enjoyed this story. I love how you gave them the powerful love, but kept the relationship, itself, real. You never tried to glamorize what his career meant for their relationship, or that an enduring love equals sunshine and roses every day. You gave us the bliss and the fighting, and I loved every word of it.

Thanks for sharing this with us!

The Highwayman, Ch 8

Bella is finding herself getting twisted up in many webs this chapter. She has to keep her own secret of her liaisons with the Highwayman. Next she has to keep the secret of James and Victoria, because James can only mean discontent for her and those she cares for. Finally, she has to hold the fact in her heart that she is going to hurt and disappoint her dear friend when she is forced to admit she does not return his affections.

I do feel a bit cock-blocked by the end of this chapter. I was anxious to see how Edward acted towards Bella in the presence of Esme and Charlie. Next chapter?

The Office, ch 15

This chapter reminds me of what makes your lemons so fantastic. It's your descriptions! The detail and care you give every movement and touch, the great length (snicker) you take in describing each kiss and sensation, truly puts the reader right into the moment. I literally have teeth marks on the knuckle of my left index finger from biting it so I whimper aloud.

I love how open they are being with what they are feeling for each other. With the rough waters ahead, I hope they can maintain their communication level.

The Highwayman, Ch 7

Real life has kept me from reviewing, but here I am now!

Let me start off by saying how much I absolutely LOVE this story! I am so thrilled to see you updating again! I knew you would be back. ::wipes tear::

I love watching Edward dance back and forth between his public persona and that of the Highwayman. I was anxious to see how he would act if he ran into Bella. Luckily, his jealousy just came across as aristocratic airs.

As for the end of this chapter, that one gets tucked away in the spank bank for later. ::fans self::

Coming to Terms, Ch 23

I am so happy that she is opening up. That she is not completely trusting yet, but she is taking the chance on Edward. Their conversation was full of the confessions and honesty we have needed from day one. These two have really grown so much through this story. This baby is going to be so loved!

Another wonderful update!

The Inspiration, Ch. 7

J.R. Ward has me ignoring my story and updates too! Which book are you on? I just finished BDB: Book 3.

Edward is growing, and not just in his pants. He is desiring something more than a good time from Bella. I thought he just might ask her to dinner or something after the museum. I liked the kiss, though.

Once again, I love your unapologetic man of an Edward. He makes me laugh. Though I worry about the health of the peen.

Kick the Tires and Light the Fires, ch. 10

I had to catch up before resuming my beta duties.

I love how calm and cool you made Bella when dealing with the reveal. I also like that you made the wolves and vampires more civilized when dealing with each other. No immediate threats, and they can be in a room together and talk.

I am surprised that Edward was so forthcoming with his intentions, and Bella is reacting almost nonchalant about it. I am hoping she makes Edward work for it. ::wink::