Beth Sabatino
Poughkeepsie, Ch. 63-66

Chapter 63
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You consistently make me laugh out loud. The "we like to fuck other people" followed by the senior comment. I had to share with the husband. He looked at me like I was crazy.

I love seeing this rag tag group of people come together, merging into one powerful family unit. We all have the family we were born with, but those that we choose to add to it, by our own volition, have even stronger bonds, because the permanent connection is only there by will and love.

Chapter 64
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He's awake!

Emmett is right about one thing; Rosalie is going to string him up by his balls. I know he is the most upset he has ever been, but that was just retarded. Maybe his HEA starts with some jail time. Who knows. Well, you know. Don't tell me. Well, tell me when you get to the chapter where you need to tell me. Nevermind. ::headdesk::

Moving on...

Chapter 65
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Uncle Dr. Cullen. You know, the introduction of something like this at this point in the game could have easily been a 'shark jumper', but they way you crafted it, made it feel natural. A missing piece of the story, that we sensed but couldn't name.

It is great to see them easing back towards the magic which was the beginning. The teasing and loving and ease. The way you write their love, it feels like the most natural connection ever. Probably why so many of us flock to read about Hoboward & Bella.

Chapter 66
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Edward has a home. He has a job, make that jobs now. He has family, biological and adopted. He has his love. Good things come. Karma is real.

I am happy that the Swans seem to be closer than ever, and communicative, and sharing. Their is a veil that has been lifted from them, and I feel it when I read them.

I'll finish tucking Edward in after I put the casseroles in the freezer.
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Beth Sabatino
Cocktails & Dreams, Ch. 25-28

Chapter 25
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That was mastery in chapter writing if I have ever seen one. You start us out with uncertainty. Bella's realization that she is going to have to face the truth of her evening. We are all anxious as we follow her to the backyard. Then, Charlie expresses his displeasure, but it soon turn joking and then sincere. I love the openness of their relationship. It demonstrates how honest this family is with each other, and the trust in one another that they can face each other even when they know a conversation won't be easy.

Next you dance us through the euphoria of the morning, afternoon delight, and the festivities at the reservation. Life is grand. Everyone is loving Edward. Edward is loving Bella, and life is good.

Finally, you pull the emotional rug out from under us. Edward says, out loud, that his father's stroke is the fault of their relationship. Gut punch. Rereading it now for the review has the tears tickling my eyes all over again.

Chapter 26
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I was saying to someone earlier today that you are my ambassadress of heart fail lately, and that I wish I would have reviewed when I first read this, because re-reading it seems to be even worse, and masochistically enough, I love it! I love stories that make me FEEL, and yours does that in spades.

My favorite part about this chapter is the part about armor. How she didn't want to build any when it came to him, and none of us should have to when it comes to the people we love, but we are human. Sometimes, the stresses of life push us to do things we would never do in good consciousness. She has to allow for his humanity, as he allows for hers.

Chapter 27
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These two are a psychiatrist's wet dream. Between life's interruptions, his now insecurity, and her self-imposed isolation, this relationship is doomed. There is only so long you can leave someone hanging by a string before they choose to cut it themselves. Bella's choice might have just been made for her.

I am glad that Bella's closest friends gave her the "pull your head out of your ass" speeches.

Now, the next chapter is sitting in my inbox, and I can't wait to get to it!

Chapter 28
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::bullhorn on::
She's there! People she is there, and some promises of forever have been laid down. Pull your heads out of your ovens!
::bullhorn off::

Thank you for bringing her to Edward. I can't believe that it looks like the end for Big Ed. I hope he becomes stable enough to see, and maybe get to know Bella, even just a little, before he goes. Deep breath.
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Beth Sabatino
Creature of Habit, Ch. 31

Fav line: "Smells like home" ::snort::
...followed by “Yes, but never wear those in my presence okay?”

I love how you ended this by intertwining every last aspect of their lives, even the patrolling. One thing that I have loved about your Bella through this whole story is that she knows who she is. From the moment she washed his patio furniture in his Stones shirt to getting Edward to sleep with her, and realize his love for her. She has known what she wanted and gotten it.

OCDward, though still fervent in his ways, has softened on the inside. He has allowed love into his life, and is forever changed. Forever loved. Never to be alone in the night again.
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Beth Sabatino
The Sacrificial Lamb, Ch. 27-31

Chapter 27
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FBIward!!! I am so happy you went this route. I really didn't like the idea of Ratward.

Girlfriend is only going to be able to use the excuse of "I was in a traumatic situation" for so long when giving Jake the cold shoulder.

It was interesting to learn how Charlie officially became mixed up in this mess.

Chapter 28
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And now we know Edward's complete history. It's awesome that he took this awful situation, that he knew he had to become a part of, and did good with it. If his character wasn't hot before...

I feel so bad about his lingering doubt and need for Bella. When life comes between love, or in this case, the mob.

Chapter 29
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ARO! Na Na naaaaaa....

I have to admit. I kinda like Doucheward. Especially the "that was a perk" with the smirk. I love you, jerk.

I love how Jacob did the figurative pissing on Bella with the fiancee comment. So him.

Also, there is no better avoidance than unconsciousness. I wish Bella would have dealt with things instead of just hiding in her room, but she got what she orchestrated in the end of this chapter. Angry Edward, and now finding herself in the arms of Aro.

Chapter 30
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I was so sure at first, that Edward would come bolting out of the court house to find them both gone. I am glad this played out on the steps, and you didn't prolong another chase, etc.

I love how you brought all their training around to this moment. This moment when it was important. Once again, Edward saves Bella. What a man.

Chapter 31
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First of all, you freaked me out with that chapter title!

I am happy to see the end is of Bella and Jacob's relationship and not Edward's life. I am glad Jacob was so accepting, in the end. This seems to be something that was a long time coming. Where two people are staying together because it is comfortable, and not because it is right.

I love the intro of Jasper! Ever the voice of reason and calm.

Bella talking to Edward in his coma was so touching. Heart ached for them a bit. I can't wait to see what happens when he wakes up. What the future holds for them both.
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Beth Sabatino
A House of Cards, Ch. 25-28

Chapter 25
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A return to Seattle, and he wants Edward to go with him. I guess what I am wondering if he is running from the memories created in Chicago, or running towards where he feels the start of his happiness, his truth, lies.

And I feel bad for Mike fucking Newton! You have made me fall in love with Mike Newton! God help me, part of me is rooting for the boy.

Chapter 26
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Edward is going. I can't say I am surprised, but I will be interested to see how it all falls out from this decision.

The most captivating part of this chapter was the coming together of Edward's two selves. The boy he was and the man he is. That they can live harmoniously in his body. I, too, wish Bella was there for that moment.

Chapter 27
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Ouch. I actually dropped an "Oh shit" out loud when Edward said he had been sleeping with Jasper out loud. Everyone deserves truth, but some truth is harsh. Especially presented like that.

Edward. Always feeling he is the root of all evil. He has to feel worthy of love before he can truly give Jasper his.

Chapter 28
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Wow! There is some growth for Edward! Instead of taking what he wanted, even though his head was saying it was a bad idea, he just put Jasper to bed.

Now that he has said the words out loud to an unconscious Jasper, maybe he will find the courage to say them to him conscious. Especially in light of the "It has always been you." We all know who he was talking about.
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Beth Sabatino
New story from EJ Santry,

Title: Team Building

Category: Twilight
Character(s): Edward & Bella

Words: 4,426
Genre(s): Romance/General
Rating: Rated: M
Summary: Edward and Bella are off to a lodge for a weekend 'team building'
retreat for their office. Flirting, knee brushing, and rock wall climbing lead
to a real coming together of their team. AH. ExB. M. Lemon. Happy Birthday,
LolaShoes!

URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5366639/1/
Beth Sabatino
Chapter 29 Title: That's How You Know
Words: 3,249

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4849197/29/