In The End, Ch. 1

I like the start of this. It's an interesting configuration of the players. The fact that Bella is alone in the world, but so close to being of age holds a lot of possibilities for her once she leaves the hospital. Also, the fact that she is so much younger than Edward will add a nice bit of tension.

I'm curious to see what you do with this.

Hair of the Dog, Ch. 10

After reading a chapter like this, I need to go back in time 2 months, so I can turn to my right, crawl into your lap, order you a drink, and hope your awesome rubs off on me. That's not creepy, right? LOL!

Seriously, though. This story has been raw and true from the start. It's so refreshing to take a look at two people where love isn't enough. There is so much hurt and so much baggage, that the sea of shit is too vast to swim through to get to the other, and I LOVE you for that.

Addiction is hard, whether it be in a glass or in a person. You know it is bad for you, but you keep on taking another drink, or in this case, staying another day.

Yet, they both let go. They did what they needed to do to get healthy. Him physically/mentally. Her emotionally/mentally. They aren't there yet, but they are taking risks and trying. They are both started on their path to happiness.