Chapter 34 Title: I Could Have Danced All Night
Words: 3,120

URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4849197/34/

The Cannabean Betrothal, Ch. 1-12

Wow! Just wow! This is one of the most unique, and best written, fics I have read it some time.

What an intelligent story of love under different cultural circumstances. Not only do you graciously expose us to and explain the ideals of this society, but you make the adherence beautiful, and not inhibiting. In a situation that might seem more like a business transaction to modern eyes, you have shown the emotion of her parents having to let go. You have shown the struggle with how to progress and get to know someone under the confines of rules that are cherished.

You have shown in the world of M ladden fic, that when building a lasting relationship, a kiss can rock your soul.

This is absolutely amazing, and I can't wait for your next installment.

New story from EJ Santry,

Title: For All the Wrong Reasons

Category: Twilight
Character(s): Jasper & Edward


Words: 7,027
Genre(s): Hurt/Comfort/Friendship
Rating: Rated: M
Summary: Jasper was sent away for all the wrong reasons – but stayed for
one very right one, him. Will he be worth everything Jasper must give up to
have him? AH/AU – SLASH BACKSLASH Entry – ExJ Collab with
DefinatelyStaying

URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5545629/1/

Clipped Wings and Inked Armor, Ch. 21

Careful what you ask for, cause you just might get it. In this case, Edward needed to hear more. He is being asked to deal with her nightmares, but they both need to know the extent of the nightmare they are helping the other cope with.

All the truth, I feel, will come out soon. I love the fact they both admitted in this great moment of weakness, that they do need each other.

Clipped Wings and Inked Armor, Ch. 19-20

I am doubting that Edward dry humped even as a teenager, so I think this is a whole new experience for him. Our boy is in a whole new world or sexual experiences. He is "doing right by her", but I love how he is still his direct, foul mouthed self. Yet one, that makes his woman breakfast in bed, and is happy just satisfying her all night. Also, I love how proud he is of her, and I hope she recognizes that.

I am happy to see Bella allowing herself to have girlfriends and even enjoy the experiences with them. I think it helps that they are so different from her friends in the past. New friends for a new chapter of her life.

Edward and the piercing pouting was so great.

Waiting for the James shit to hit the fan.

Clipped Wings and Inked Armor, Ch. 18

Looks like James is stalking. That can't be good.

Most people, coupled with his need to possess and mark Bella, would think Edward's wanting to know where she is and his paranoia when she doesn't pick up the phone as over-bearing, but I just see that scared boy that is afraid to lose one more thing he loves.

It will be interesting to see if, over time, there begins to be friction between the two of them if Bella stops being so susceptible to Edward's charms, and starts refusing him things he wants.

Clipped Wings and Inked Armor, Ch. 17

I am so happy they got that all resolved for now. Though, I can't help but fear how Edward is going to flip his shit when he finds out it was Bella's wedding they were all headed to. News like that will not go over well with the possessive.

The end, in the private ink room was perfect, for them. I loved the hoodie, followed by Edward's own fucked up way of letting her know how he feels. Often in fics, when Edward pleases Bella, but doesn't allow her to reciprocate, it feels trite, but here, we know what a huge personality shift it is for him to be unselfish with a lover.