Beth Sabatino
Clipped Wings and Inked Armor, Ch. 11

I loved this day together. Edward being all protective and possessive of her. It was great to see Bella almost happy, too. Edward's calming presence for an entire day had to help. Then her surprise for him was EXCELLENT! I like that you had her feeding him the mini-cupcakes. We know she wants him too, but it was a comfortable action, that she doesn't always show with him.

Despite poor Edward's constant state of arousal, he is being such a good friend to her. If Alice only knew.

The way Edward can read Bella's emotions now will be helpful as he slowly draws Bella's story from her. And at some point, he will have to be equally as forthcoming.
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