Love In My Box, Ch. 15
So nice, I had to read it twice.
This chapter was the perfect culmination of all the build-up from the previous chapters. Not only was it beautiful and romantic, and had me holding my breath and holding back my tears, it was THEM. Bella's rambling. Edward's verbally walking through his steps of getting Bella off. Yet you peppered it with those beautiful moments when they just let themselves go. It was perfect.
Your story has easily become one of my absolute favorites. As always, I patiently wait for the next installment.
So nice, I had to read it twice.
This chapter was the perfect culmination of all the build-up from the previous chapters. Not only was it beautiful and romantic, and had me holding my breath and holding back my tears, it was THEM. Bella's rambling. Edward's verbally walking through his steps of getting Bella off. Yet you peppered it with those beautiful moments when they just let themselves go. It was perfect.
Your story has easily become one of my absolute favorites. As always, I patiently wait for the next installment.
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