The Trip Home, Ch. 1-5
Lookie who is late to the party, but has finally arrived!
There is a lot of passion and heat in this story. The scenes between the three of them are at their hottest, when you are writing about one of them watching the others. The way you describe their emotions, and what they are witnessing, really puts me in the moment.
But you also, without a doubt, have convinced me of how much love there is here. Edward and Jasper are so obviously in love, and that love is branching out to include Bella.
This journey will not be an easy one, I am sure, and they rarely end in a way that everyone is happy. I shall happily enjoy the ride no matter how it goes. :)
Lookie who is late to the party, but has finally arrived!
There is a lot of passion and heat in this story. The scenes between the three of them are at their hottest, when you are writing about one of them watching the others. The way you describe their emotions, and what they are witnessing, really puts me in the moment.
But you also, without a doubt, have convinced me of how much love there is here. Edward and Jasper are so obviously in love, and that love is branching out to include Bella.
This journey will not be an easy one, I am sure, and they rarely end in a way that everyone is happy. I shall happily enjoy the ride no matter how it goes. :)
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