Unwrapped, Ch. 1
Is it hot in here, or is it just your fic?! You know, you warned me about fic cliches, but it wasn't off putting. The only thing I have trouble wrapping my brain around in these type of fic situations, is that in my mind, Edward would never share Bella in a million years. I am open minded enough to let that reservation go when it is written well.
Each pairing was it's own special brand of lovin'. Poor Esme got left out of the fun. Nobody, apparently, wants to fuck with their mom around.
You do write some hot smexin', though, girl!
Is it hot in here, or is it just your fic?! You know, you warned me about fic cliches, but it wasn't off putting. The only thing I have trouble wrapping my brain around in these type of fic situations, is that in my mind, Edward would never share Bella in a million years. I am open minded enough to let that reservation go when it is written well.
Each pairing was it's own special brand of lovin'. Poor Esme got left out of the fun. Nobody, apparently, wants to fuck with their mom around.
You do write some hot smexin', though, girl!
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