The Road I'm On, Ch. 2

I am really enjoying this so far!

First off, I appreciate that you made Rosalie sweet. She is so often portrayed as the ice queen, and I see her being the soft, maternal woman if she had gotten what she wanted out of life.

I like the richness you have given the secondary characters, even in just these first two chapters.

Bella is going to be interesting, because I get the feeling that she has been dealing with this condition for a while, and that it was caused by some event, though we are unclear as to what. Also, you tease us with a possible physical deformity or maybe scarring of some sort.

I like Jasper as a therapist. It suits him.