Tropic of Virgo, ch 34
I am so glad you didn't drag out Edward finding Bella. It was the perfect length of time. Your writing of her in the closet was amazing. I felt tense and claustrophobic (though in RL I am not). I could feel the pain in her throat, and her despair in the thought of not being found. Brilliant.
Hotdog = stadium mustard or a Skyliner, no onion from Skyline.
I am so glad you didn't drag out Edward finding Bella. It was the perfect length of time. Your writing of her in the closet was amazing. I felt tense and claustrophobic (though in RL I am not). I could feel the pain in her throat, and her despair in the thought of not being found. Brilliant.
Hotdog = stadium mustard or a Skyliner, no onion from Skyline.
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