Counterpoint, Ch. 7
Reading the first part of this chapter hurt so much after the last few chapters of AA5. It makes Edward's loss of Carlisle all the more hurtful. He really did lose his best friend, as well as his father. Conversely, I am happy to see that they really did have a lot of time together, and that Edward got to hear so many of the stories that only his dad could tell him before he passed.
The second half of the story, and in the shower, was complete win. I love seeing your mature boy and his winning cock! LOL! It is so funny to me the difference in his external and internal dialog. So well written.
Reading the first part of this chapter hurt so much after the last few chapters of AA5. It makes Edward's loss of Carlisle all the more hurtful. He really did lose his best friend, as well as his father. Conversely, I am happy to see that they really did have a lot of time together, and that Edward got to hear so many of the stories that only his dad could tell him before he passed.
The second half of the story, and in the shower, was complete win. I love seeing your mature boy and his winning cock! LOL! It is so funny to me the difference in his external and internal dialog. So well written.
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