A Murmur of Fire in the Vein, Ch. 21
I am glad that you didn't draw out the rehab, and condensed it down into one chapter. It really is about repetition and healing. I like how you balanced the chapter between Bella and her visits and therapy with Jasper at the rehab center, and what her life was like at home. She had some serious rearranging and cleaning up to do after this. Sort of her aftermath, and preparing for the future.
I still can't believe her and Rosalie having it out at the rehab center. hehehe.
I am glad that you didn't draw out the rehab, and condensed it down into one chapter. It really is about repetition and healing. I like how you balanced the chapter between Bella and her visits and therapy with Jasper at the rehab center, and what her life was like at home. She had some serious rearranging and cleaning up to do after this. Sort of her aftermath, and preparing for the future.
I still can't believe her and Rosalie having it out at the rehab center. hehehe.
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