Beth Sabatino
The Cannabean Betrothal, Ch. 17-19

Chapter 17
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This goes into my list of all time favorite chapters. The masking of his words to her within the descriptions of the swans. The toying of each finger with each new proclamation with her realization culminating with the slip of the ring on her finger. It was absolutely perfect.

Chapter 18
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I loved now seeing all the preparation and the drama that went into that perfect moment in the last chapter. It is so great seeing Edward so free, emotionally. The fact that before he reacts to things now, he thinks about Bella and guidance she has given him. He is trusting her, such as the information about the house. He is starting to realize the joy of SHARING his life.

Chapter 19
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I don't like this at all. I can smell what you are cooking, lady. *glares*

I do like the baby steps you continue to make between Edward and Bella. A brush here. A revelation there. Also, Bella is being thrown into the light on what is ahead for her in her marriage. The intimacy she has probably imagined, but not in the graphic detail the quilting bee exposed her to. :)
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