The Training, Ch. 18-23
This is a compilation of reviews from Chapter 18-23.
The thing that I have loved most about the last few chapters is how they are both changing, for the better, I think.
Bella is starting to get the nuances of her roll as a submissive. I think she is garnering more pleasure as she gains understanding, and in turn, is gaining more confidence in herself. She is starting to see that this is a partnership, despite the dominant/submissive rolls.
Edward is such a different man than the one we met two stories ago. Outside of the collar, we see a gentle teacher, a tender lover, and a man who is absolutely in love. The attic scene was one of my favorites you have written. Also, we see Edward the all powerful business man wanting nothing more than to be home.
Lovely progression of both characters.
This is a compilation of reviews from Chapter 18-23.
The thing that I have loved most about the last few chapters is how they are both changing, for the better, I think.
Bella is starting to get the nuances of her roll as a submissive. I think she is garnering more pleasure as she gains understanding, and in turn, is gaining more confidence in herself. She is starting to see that this is a partnership, despite the dominant/submissive rolls.
Edward is such a different man than the one we met two stories ago. Outside of the collar, we see a gentle teacher, a tender lover, and a man who is absolutely in love. The attic scene was one of my favorites you have written. Also, we see Edward the all powerful business man wanting nothing more than to be home.
Lovely progression of both characters.
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