Hiding in Plain Sight, Ch. 22
Now the final pieces are falling into place. Aro is Uncle Aro. Bella was working for the family business. Unfortunately, it was a dirty business. We know everything now.
I liked how you tied Jenks into your story. That he worked for the bad guys, but was actually a good guy. It makes sense the clues, etc. that he left for her. For Edward.
Finally, you played the laundromat scene well. I thought Bella's story was over too. Edward knows everything now. The curtain is gone. Now, they run together.
Now the final pieces are falling into place. Aro is Uncle Aro. Bella was working for the family business. Unfortunately, it was a dirty business. We know everything now.
I liked how you tied Jenks into your story. That he worked for the bad guys, but was actually a good guy. It makes sense the clues, etc. that he left for her. For Edward.
Finally, you played the laundromat scene well. I thought Bella's story was over too. Edward knows everything now. The curtain is gone. Now, they run together.
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