Over The Top, ch 26
Aw, starfish, angel.
You are a master of timing in your story. You have a sense for how long to make distances and angst last before bringing it back around to reunion. Your characters are intelligent and reasonable. Jasper is honest in his trepidation, and Edward is wise to know it is deserved. You have made Edward sincerely repentant and desirous of being deserving of someone like Jasper. Jasper, in turn, is willing to be forgiving hoping that the payout for giving his heart over to love will be a lifetime of rewards.
I look forward to these two coming back together at a gradual pace last time. The first time was a ball of flames (no pun intended), and it is the reason they both crashed so hard. A gradual climb, this time, will established a firm and communicative relationship.
Aw, starfish, angel.
You are a master of timing in your story. You have a sense for how long to make distances and angst last before bringing it back around to reunion. Your characters are intelligent and reasonable. Jasper is honest in his trepidation, and Edward is wise to know it is deserved. You have made Edward sincerely repentant and desirous of being deserving of someone like Jasper. Jasper, in turn, is willing to be forgiving hoping that the payout for giving his heart over to love will be a lifetime of rewards.
I look forward to these two coming back together at a gradual pace last time. The first time was a ball of flames (no pun intended), and it is the reason they both crashed so hard. A gradual climb, this time, will established a firm and communicative relationship.
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