Poughkeepsie, Ch 52-55
Chapter 52
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I don't think anything went RIGHT in this chapter. It was heartbreaking watching Edward so desperately try to be a man. He was knocked down at every turn. The fact that he was facing a man, who not only knew he was homeless, but had been charitable to him in the past. Then he has to walk away from Bella to hold onto his last shred of dignity. Then, it appears he walked in and possibly heard any part of that conversation between Bella and Charlie. ::exhale::
I can't fault Charlie for how he reacted. Going with the intel he had, even if he knew that this man was Bella's other half in this life, I would still show all the same concern he did.
Glad to hear that Alice is in the hospital. At least, for now, she is alive.
Chapter 53
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Emmett in the bank was one of the funniest things I have read in a while. Especially reading the FF over the woman's shoulder! So great. A tribute to all of us who read are pervy porn in inappropriate places. :-)
Then you do a 180 on us, and give us intense and passionate Emmett as he thinks that Rosalie blew up with his building. That was intense.
Chapter 54
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I knew Rosalie would figure it out. She's a smart cookie, that one. I loved the reunion with the two of them, and their escape. The joy was short lived though, after we get the text about Jasper. You're going to kill him, aren't you. Don't tell me. I just have a feeling. Wouldn't the irony be that it is only the two "evil doers" who get their HEA.
Chapter 55
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The best part about the interview. The fact that you treated Emmett how any of us would treat someone who just crawled through our window wearing a fancy ass suit. WTF?! I liked that you maintained your bad ass attitude throughout.
For a second there, I thought Edward was going to go all Teineman Square monk on us. I am so glad you didn't...yet. He definitely went a direction I wasn't expecting. Just as I thought he would desperately cleave to the familiar, his comfort items. He sends those bitches up in flames instead.
I am so sorry for Edward that he heard what Bella was saying, and didn't hear the truth or motivation behind the words. What will his next move be? Maybe it is best, for Edward, to get a clean start somewhere else.
I am curious if it is Mouse following Edward at this point or the ne'er-do-well crowd.
Chapter 52
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I don't think anything went RIGHT in this chapter. It was heartbreaking watching Edward so desperately try to be a man. He was knocked down at every turn. The fact that he was facing a man, who not only knew he was homeless, but had been charitable to him in the past. Then he has to walk away from Bella to hold onto his last shred of dignity. Then, it appears he walked in and possibly heard any part of that conversation between Bella and Charlie. ::exhale::
I can't fault Charlie for how he reacted. Going with the intel he had, even if he knew that this man was Bella's other half in this life, I would still show all the same concern he did.
Glad to hear that Alice is in the hospital. At least, for now, she is alive.
Chapter 53
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Emmett in the bank was one of the funniest things I have read in a while. Especially reading the FF over the woman's shoulder! So great. A tribute to all of us who read are pervy porn in inappropriate places. :-)
Then you do a 180 on us, and give us intense and passionate Emmett as he thinks that Rosalie blew up with his building. That was intense.
Chapter 54
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I knew Rosalie would figure it out. She's a smart cookie, that one. I loved the reunion with the two of them, and their escape. The joy was short lived though, after we get the text about Jasper. You're going to kill him, aren't you. Don't tell me. I just have a feeling. Wouldn't the irony be that it is only the two "evil doers" who get their HEA.
Chapter 55
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The best part about the interview. The fact that you treated Emmett how any of us would treat someone who just crawled through our window wearing a fancy ass suit. WTF?! I liked that you maintained your bad ass attitude throughout.
For a second there, I thought Edward was going to go all Teineman Square monk on us. I am so glad you didn't...yet. He definitely went a direction I wasn't expecting. Just as I thought he would desperately cleave to the familiar, his comfort items. He sends those bitches up in flames instead.
I am so sorry for Edward that he heard what Bella was saying, and didn't hear the truth or motivation behind the words. What will his next move be? Maybe it is best, for Edward, to get a clean start somewhere else.
I am curious if it is Mouse following Edward at this point or the ne'er-do-well crowd.
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