Beth Sabatino
Art After 5, Ch. 55

Great ending to a wonderful story. I loved the arc of Bella through this story. It is hard to allow yourself to trust in love when you have been so abandoned and hurt by it. I am so happy that you allowed Bella to submit to some therapy and heal herself before she sought out Edward again.

Edward's journey hurts a bit more, because he starts young, naive, and so optimistic. It is sad to know that we all end up experiencing things that cloud our views on life. I am sorry it was being forsaken by his first love, and then to loose his dad so young.

Finally, I am happy with how you ended this. Things aren't perfect, but they are filled with love and hope for the future.
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