Beth Sabatino
Daedalus in Exile, Ch. 2-4

Chapter 2
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Predator to savior. It is interesting to find Edward not giving a second thought to killing Bella at this point. She is there for his taking, and he has just saved her, not because he wants to protect her humanity, but because he doesn't want to share his snack.

Now an even more tempting Bella lays before him, as that precious blood he craves pours from her.

Not her, ye says. We'll see, says I.

Chapter 3
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Decisions, decisions. I love the subtle shift of his psyche. "Her room". He is already staking a permanence for her that I am not sure he is even aware of yet. Now, he is researching how to save her. Though, she has a head injury that is bleeding out. You might want to smack some vampiric speed on that, buddy.

Chapter 4
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Bella is clean and relocated. Edward's talking to her as he treats her, especially his sweet "sorry", is so endearing. I am waiting for Carlisle to show up because Alice has had a vision, but another part of me feels that Edward needs to deal with this in solitary.

Looking forward to more!
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