Cocktails & Dreams, Ch. 30-31

Chapter 30
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You wrote this Christmas perfectly. You wove quite moments and silent tears of those who are grieving with the joyous moments that show that life does go on, and that you don't have to sacrifice happiness while mourning.

The comedy in this chapter was great. Emmett walking in on them and then Bella's gift of the bell was so clever. Then it was nice to see filterless Bella make a return as well.

Finally, all the gifts were so thoughtful and carried so much meaning. I love the do-overs, and the promise of the future.

Chapter 31
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What a great ending to a great story! They are obviously very contented in their future, and as in love as ever. You wrote the comfortableness of a couple who have long been together perfectly. It contrasted nicely with the Bella and Edward through the story. After all of these years, they are still cashing in their "do-overs"! :)

Thank-you so much for sharing this story with the rest of us! I've really enjoyed reading it.