A Life Extraordinary, Ch. 1-2
Chapter 1
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She's off and running! I liked the detail of Bella's alter perception of Edward's skin. Now what is going on with girlfriend's eyes and touch! Proceeding with abandon.
Chapter 2
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Can you imagine being afraid to touch the man you love while you have sex, because you might hurt him? Well, I guess you can, you wrote it. That was a tad heartbreaking seeing Edward almost begging Bella just to hold him. :(
Chapter 1
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She's off and running! I liked the detail of Bella's alter perception of Edward's skin. Now what is going on with girlfriend's eyes and touch! Proceeding with abandon.
Chapter 2
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Can you imagine being afraid to touch the man you love while you have sex, because you might hurt him? Well, I guess you can, you wrote it. That was a tad heartbreaking seeing Edward almost begging Bella just to hold him. :(
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