elusiV, Ch. 7

I love the addition of the fact that all vampires fall asleep at dawn, and the rate that they wake up is based on age. I thought that was very cool. Very creative.

Now, for the good stuff. Edward and Jacob in bed and then the shower together. Hole - E - FUCK! That was sooo hot! You made it raw and needy, but at the same time it was equally slow and sensual. You displayed how much it was about their pleasure, yet there was not doubt that there was emotion driving their actions. I am loving to see that emotion starting to spill over out of the bedroom as well. They are all experiencing jealousy and protectiveness of their threesome.

Finally, the crime scene. I am anxious to see what it is Bella does to them that buckles them in order to exacerbate or trigger her gift.