Beth Sabatino
Edward Wallbanger, Ch. 10

I love the pace at which you are rocking this story. I like that they are becoming friends first. Extremely obvious sexual comments friends, but friends. It is great seeing two adults talk, confident in who they are, and getting to know each other.

I also liked the use of texts to plan the Tahoe trip, and start to unfold the mis-matched couples.
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