My Yes, My No, Ch. 9

These two have struggled so much in their efforts to find their communication. I am happy that they are starting to trust each other with their unshared past and trusting in the other not to let go or leave, as the case may be.

This chapter made my heart hurt at times, because it really highlighted Edward's pain. How this is it for him. If she says "No", then his world is gone. There is no "moving on" for him.

I love the merging symmetry with the other story line as this chapter came to a close. You played that masterfully.

Looking forward to the story lines uniting, and how you bring us home!