My Yes, My No, Ch. 10
I am...I feel...this was...::rubs forehead::
The way you wrote Edward in this chapter, you captured the feeling of someone being so absolutely overwhelmed with their emotion, with the possibility of the future,...well, it was just amazing. I, myself, felt like there was something in me that if I didn't find the words or actions to release it, my body might combust. Your words put me there.
This time, it was making love. It was everything connecting with the person you love with all of your being should be.
Lovely, Lo.
I am...I feel...this was...::rubs forehead::
The way you wrote Edward in this chapter, you captured the feeling of someone being so absolutely overwhelmed with their emotion, with the possibility of the future,...well, it was just amazing. I, myself, felt like there was something in me that if I didn't find the words or actions to release it, my body might combust. Your words put me there.
This time, it was making love. It was everything connecting with the person you love with all of your being should be.
Lovely, Lo.
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