Beth Sabatino
Bella and the Billionaire, Ch. 26-32

Chapter 26
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Edward is a single mother's wet dream. He really is the sweetest when it comes to Bella. I love how he has taken them both into his life with all of his heart. They both deserve a man like this in their lives.

Piano lovin' in the future? Can't wait!

Chapter 27
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I loved the paragraph where Edward was dreaming of their future together and the little nuances about Bella that he loved so much. It was such a beautiful idea. Sometimes the sexiest fantasies are those that don't involve sex at all.

You wrote their love making as a beautiful dance between desperation and gentle need. Lovely.

Chapter 28
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Nothing more beautiful than seeing Jacob and Renee being handed their asses! Fantastic!

Chapter 29
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A romantic evening, and a great fantasy wank in the shower ruined by Psycho 1 and 2. You write crazy in such a shocking, yet believable way. It is truly amazing that your Bella has any ounce of sanity herself!

I am glad that it appears that her days dealing with them will be most likely rolling to a close.

Rose is awesome!

Chapter 30
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FINALLY! Hopefully these psychos are out of Bella and Charlie's lives forever! Uncle Caius was awesome. We need more judges like him. I have no patience for abuse of any sort.

Chapter 31
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LOL! This was the perfect proposal for these two. Him blurting out the question with no precursor, and her screaming an orgasmic yes. This is the acceptance you get when you abstain forever. ::giggle::

I love the idea of them getting married in the backyard with just those nearest and dearest. It suits them.

Chapter 32
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Holy rabbit fucking, Batman! How many damn kids do they have now?
Charlie (16), Esme (12), Anthony (6), Carlisle (2), Alec (10 mo.), and fetus. Though I can't blame Bella. If I was married to billionaire Edward who worshiped me, I would carry his spawn until my uterus gave out, too.

I love the whole Charlie and Lily bit too, and how Edward is torn between patting him on the back and strangling him. :) And how he is on his own w/ Emmett. hehehe. So funny that Bella and Rose know, and went with Lily to get the birth control. Better safe than grannies.

You gave them a wonderful ending.
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