The Office, Ch. 17
Here is the genius of your writing...I know what is going to happen next, and still, I am sitting here fretting over what the fuck is going to happen when he closes that door!
Also, rereading through this to review, I am once again AMAZED at the mastery of your sex scenes. The build up you provide...then it culminates in a symphony of words and lips and tongues and climaxes! You are the master class, wingman.
My favorite thing about this chapter is seeing Edward starting to dream of the future. He is fantasizing about everything from proposing to every day being with each other doing mundane things like preparing a meal. He wants it all. He wants her.
Here is the genius of your writing...I know what is going to happen next, and still, I am sitting here fretting over what the fuck is going to happen when he closes that door!
Also, rereading through this to review, I am once again AMAZED at the mastery of your sex scenes. The build up you provide...then it culminates in a symphony of words and lips and tongues and climaxes! You are the master class, wingman.
My favorite thing about this chapter is seeing Edward starting to dream of the future. He is fantasizing about everything from proposing to every day being with each other doing mundane things like preparing a meal. He wants it all. He wants her.
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