The Training, Ch. 1
One of my favorite things you have written in this introductory chapter is Bella's mindset. Her need for this relationship. The way she fingered her collar as she drove to his house. How she was focused on his approval. How, when she failed him, it brought her to tears. I FELT her disappointment in herself. The self-loathing washed over me. You put me right in that moment. Fantastic.
This line made me laugh out loud, "Hell, no, I didn’t want eighteen. I didn’t want the eight I had coming."
Tremendous start, southern belle!
One of my favorite things you have written in this introductory chapter is Bella's mindset. Her need for this relationship. The way she fingered her collar as she drove to his house. How she was focused on his approval. How, when she failed him, it brought her to tears. I FELT her disappointment in herself. The self-loathing washed over me. You put me right in that moment. Fantastic.
This line made me laugh out loud, "Hell, no, I didn’t want eighteen. I didn’t want the eight I had coming."
Tremendous start, southern belle!
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