The Fallout, Ch. 17-19
Chapter 17
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I am so happy that the girls are getting their harvest festival. They all deserve something to look forward to. Now, most of the family knows about Edward's plan for self-destruction, as well. There is no way they are going to let him do it.
The light-hearted moment in the garden was a nice reprieve. As the slightest glimmer of hope in finding a friend in Seth.
I am glad that Edward, in the past, shared the burden of knowing about Carlisle. He shouldn't have to weather that on his own.
Chapter 18
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Charlie has asked Edward to say good-bye to Bella with him. That is rough. Saying good-bye equals admitting that you are no longer holding out hope, and resigning to the fact that she is dead. Part of me thinks that minuscule bit of hope is all that is keeping Edward tied to this earth.
All I can say about that last paragraph is "Fuuuck". That is not how she should have found out. Though as stress levels are constantly on the rise in the bunker, subtlety is going right out of the window. Time for the family to regroup and move forward.
Chapter 19
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Jasper vision! Oh snap! I would like to know how they are going to play that little scene off.
I felt like Edward was a bit sabotaged by the Bella tribute. I mean, he knew it was coming, but to play her lullaby without his permission. How could Alice think that he would be OK with that?
The moments are the dance floor were nice, but I felt bad for Leah being snubbed only to have Edward accept dances from other. :( I like that you made Tanya a friend. So many want to make her the conniving bitch.
Finally, for them to have the conversation, and wrangle the humans, and have Carlisle come back to find EDWARD with human blood in his veins. THAT was shocking. Poor Edward. Always left appearing to be the asshole.
Chapter 17
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I am so happy that the girls are getting their harvest festival. They all deserve something to look forward to. Now, most of the family knows about Edward's plan for self-destruction, as well. There is no way they are going to let him do it.
The light-hearted moment in the garden was a nice reprieve. As the slightest glimmer of hope in finding a friend in Seth.
I am glad that Edward, in the past, shared the burden of knowing about Carlisle. He shouldn't have to weather that on his own.
Chapter 18
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Charlie has asked Edward to say good-bye to Bella with him. That is rough. Saying good-bye equals admitting that you are no longer holding out hope, and resigning to the fact that she is dead. Part of me thinks that minuscule bit of hope is all that is keeping Edward tied to this earth.
All I can say about that last paragraph is "Fuuuck". That is not how she should have found out. Though as stress levels are constantly on the rise in the bunker, subtlety is going right out of the window. Time for the family to regroup and move forward.
Chapter 19
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Jasper vision! Oh snap! I would like to know how they are going to play that little scene off.
I felt like Edward was a bit sabotaged by the Bella tribute. I mean, he knew it was coming, but to play her lullaby without his permission. How could Alice think that he would be OK with that?
The moments are the dance floor were nice, but I felt bad for Leah being snubbed only to have Edward accept dances from other. :( I like that you made Tanya a friend. So many want to make her the conniving bitch.
Finally, for them to have the conversation, and wrangle the humans, and have Carlisle come back to find EDWARD with human blood in his veins. THAT was shocking. Poor Edward. Always left appearing to be the asshole.
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