Counterpoint, Ch. 10-12

Chapter 10
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I love that Edward and Bella stood in her kitchen and had an entire conversation about the root of the phrase "you suck" followed by a detailed an honest conversation about fellatio. This is what is fantastic about your story. The end of the story, also shows it's counter balance. The fact that Bella talks calmly and easily about sexual acts and can have phone sex w/out blinking an eye, but stutters and stammers when it comes to discussing emotions.

I love Edward's confidence in his feelings. That is very humbling.

Chapter 11
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Declaration of love chapter! It must be hard to love someone and wish you were a part of their lives when it happened only to realize that you were pre-pubescent at the time. Those things always seem to kick the gap back open, just as they move closer.

I am happy that they didn't immediately make love after Bella admitted to what she was feeling. She needs to see that there is more to love than the physical act.

Chapter 12
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I love how Bella walked Edward through this first experience. That she was encouraging and loving. That she reminded him that having an orgasm was not what made their coupling special. It was the fact that it was them. That this was love.

Edward at the beginning doing the scientific analysis of how to get Bella off was hilarious too. So great.