Beth Sabatino
Brotherly Devotion, Ch. 6-7

Chapter 6
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The cat may be out of the bag now. Rose hinted she knew. Tanya practically assaulted Bella with her accusations. Then Alice walks in on them. I don't know if Alice saw Bella or not, but them moaning out each others names in the bathroom at a crowded party. Odds are not good.

But the thing I absolutely love about this chapter is how you had Edward react to Bella's ending things. Instead of being Emoward and clinking away in anger or defeat, he just turned and said no. That they were worth fighting for, and he loved her. I love that kid.

Chapter 7
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That Thanksgiving dinner was like a Mexican stand off. Everyone with their sights aimed on someone, everyone not making a move, but when the first shot is fired at dinner, it all falls down like dominos.

I feel the worst for Edward, but he should have known getting involved with a married woman, ESPECIALLY when said woman is his sister-in-law, that things would not work out easily, if at all.

I am glad Emmett and Bella had some sort of confrontation. They aren't even trying to talk for the most part. Glad something happened. Bella feels like she is falling apart, but really, the ball is starting to roll, if not slowly.
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