Poughkeepsie, Ch. 67

Burying of Mouse had me snot sobbing. What is it about the way out wrote that big, knitting son-of-a-bitch that just kills me? I really connected with that guy.

The wedding was perfect, and I love that you had Rose broadcasting to Emmett. The symbiosis of the perfection of Edward/Bella and Jasper/Alice's love was in harsh contrast to Rose and Emmett at the end. Rose is so tragic in this story.

It was fun to see Jasper cut loose in the bedroom, as well. Rawr, or should I say 'Howdy, pilgrim'!