At The Deep End, Ch. 24
It is so hard watching someone you love go through something and not knowing how or not being allowed to comfort them. You write Edward's helplessness beautifully. Wanting so desperately to "fix it", yet not being allowed access at all. I am so happy you made him patient until Jasper was ready.
I was so happy that you had Rose, Emmett, and Edward's parents there, and Esme push her way in as a mom...a loving mom would do.
The ending of this chapter was perfect. After Jasper received a physical and emotional beat down for his love of Edward, they both needed that connection, to feel the REAL love that makes it all worth while. I hope that Jasper feels the forever Edward wants with him.
It is so hard watching someone you love go through something and not knowing how or not being allowed to comfort them. You write Edward's helplessness beautifully. Wanting so desperately to "fix it", yet not being allowed access at all. I am so happy you made him patient until Jasper was ready.
I was so happy that you had Rose, Emmett, and Edward's parents there, and Esme push her way in as a mom...a loving mom would do.
The ending of this chapter was perfect. After Jasper received a physical and emotional beat down for his love of Edward, they both needed that connection, to feel the REAL love that makes it all worth while. I hope that Jasper feels the forever Edward wants with him.
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