Beth Sabatino
The Naked Guy Upstairs, Ch. 20

It's de-lightful. It's de-licious. It's de-lovely.

I love that you had this moment when they first honestly make love to be sprinkled with their trademark banter. It wouldn't have been them with out it. Their unique nature that just works is what has me imbibing the last 20 chapters.

No wonder Edward to be emotionally void. He has been without love for so long, but it is more than that, he has been living in a state of indifference since his mother died. Which explains the way he lived his life. I think that Bella struck him so from day one is that, though it was ire at first, she reacted to him with emotion.
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