Counterpoint, Ch. 28
That chapter should come with a prerequisite drink. I can't take a crying Edward. It just hurts my heart.
I forget sometimes how direct and almost clipped Bella is at times. In a chapter when we know they are both hurting so much, they both do a good outward show of indifference.
You are writing this one in such a way that I almost forget that I know how this one ends. ;)
That chapter should come with a prerequisite drink. I can't take a crying Edward. It just hurts my heart.
I forget sometimes how direct and almost clipped Bella is at times. In a chapter when we know they are both hurting so much, they both do a good outward show of indifference.
You are writing this one in such a way that I almost forget that I know how this one ends. ;)
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