Beth Sabatino
The Naked Guy Upstairs, Ch. 9-11

Chapter 9
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I like the laid back bookworm giving Edward as much as the sexy talking Edward. He is playful and kinda dorky. I doubt he lets many people see that side of him.

I like that they are falling into a routine. Despite his no sleepover policy of the past, Edward is willingly carrying her to his bed, and making a habit of crashing on her couch. They are becoming a couple without even realizing it.

Chapter 10
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You know my favorite thing about the two of them, at the moment. Is that you totally believe they are just friends. They act and fight like friends. There are those other feelings lingering in the back of both of their minds, but they are still very much in the friend zone.

Bella's confidence is increasing, and Edward's is waning. Tuesday will be beautiful or an utter fucking disaster.

Chapter 11
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Danger, Will Robinson! DANGER!!

Why oh why could they not do this as themselves? Role playing was a BAD idea. The whole scene was beautifully written and orchestrated, but I sat cringing the whole time chanting "This is a bad idea. This is a BAD idea."

Now Edward is confused, and Bella fancies herself in love. No good can come of this. At least...not right now.
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