The Naked Guy Upstairs, Ch. 12
This is one of those chapters where you could have followed the prescribed route of several chapters of silence and angst. Instead, you gave us talking. Though not everything was discussed today, Edward showed up at her door, and they talked and touched and eased some of the awkwardness away.
There are still things to say, but I think it is OK, if they slowly delve into it, as long as they keep moving forward and sharing.
This is one of those chapters where you could have followed the prescribed route of several chapters of silence and angst. Instead, you gave us talking. Though not everything was discussed today, Edward showed up at her door, and they talked and touched and eased some of the awkwardness away.
There are still things to say, but I think it is OK, if they slowly delve into it, as long as they keep moving forward and sharing.
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