The Lion and The Jackal, Ch. 16
One thing I like about your James in this story is that the man doesn't have one redeeming quality at all. There is no leeway to like him AT ALL. Just a violent, wasted soul. This is perfect, because it does make the reader fear him. Fear what he is capable of.
I have a feeling that he will succeed in phase 1 of his plan. Then I think we will find Tanya in trouble and Edward once again leaving Bella. :(
One thing I like about your James in this story is that the man doesn't have one redeeming quality at all. There is no leeway to like him AT ALL. Just a violent, wasted soul. This is perfect, because it does make the reader fear him. Fear what he is capable of.
I have a feeling that he will succeed in phase 1 of his plan. Then I think we will find Tanya in trouble and Edward once again leaving Bella. :(
Post a Comment