The Naked Guy Upstairs, Ch. 21-22
Chapter 21
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This chapter is full of the fun and clever banter I have come to love and expect from you. It's a lesson on keeping up, and it is like watching the final match at Wimbledon, where your head is turning back and forth as words are volleyed by two smart minds.
I like this turn of events in Bella's possible career path. You never know when you find what truly makes you happy. Your job should have to be work.
Finally, grandmother down! I see Bella acting as a bridge between this senile woman, and the man who is still a bit of the rejected boy.
Chapter 22
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I love how these two talk. I'm not just talking dialog and banter this time, I mean that they communicate. They listen, and really take into consideration what each other says. That is a rare and magical thing. THAT is what makes relationships last until death do you part.
The revisiting of the tent was perfect. The arc you have taken Edward on, that he is still on, has been wonderful to experience. Bella gives him a safe environment, an environment of trust. When you are in that, you are willing to try things like recreating the situation of your first kiss to do it better this time. Also, to think about giving an old woman a chance to make peace.
Chapter 21
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This chapter is full of the fun and clever banter I have come to love and expect from you. It's a lesson on keeping up, and it is like watching the final match at Wimbledon, where your head is turning back and forth as words are volleyed by two smart minds.
I like this turn of events in Bella's possible career path. You never know when you find what truly makes you happy. Your job should have to be work.
Finally, grandmother down! I see Bella acting as a bridge between this senile woman, and the man who is still a bit of the rejected boy.
Chapter 22
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I love how these two talk. I'm not just talking dialog and banter this time, I mean that they communicate. They listen, and really take into consideration what each other says. That is a rare and magical thing. THAT is what makes relationships last until death do you part.
The revisiting of the tent was perfect. The arc you have taken Edward on, that he is still on, has been wonderful to experience. Bella gives him a safe environment, an environment of trust. When you are in that, you are willing to try things like recreating the situation of your first kiss to do it better this time. Also, to think about giving an old woman a chance to make peace.
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