An Introduction to Swirl and Daisy, Ch. 8-11
I love in the construct of this story, you have allowed for every awkwardness of youth. Especially when Alice gives Edward whatever ill advice led to the Valentine's Day disaster. At that age, it is so easy to believe someone who you feel has more experience than you, when they tell you that you need to change or doing it differently would be better. Thank goodness for Bella's perception.
My favorite thing about the two of them is their ability to flourish together as themselves. Nothing could be a more powerful first step into love than being loved for exactly who you are.
It will see how these two evolve in high school. If Edward will abandon childhood interests. If new social opportunities (clubs, sports, etc.) will change who they are. Looking forward to more!
I love in the construct of this story, you have allowed for every awkwardness of youth. Especially when Alice gives Edward whatever ill advice led to the Valentine's Day disaster. At that age, it is so easy to believe someone who you feel has more experience than you, when they tell you that you need to change or doing it differently would be better. Thank goodness for Bella's perception.
My favorite thing about the two of them is their ability to flourish together as themselves. Nothing could be a more powerful first step into love than being loved for exactly who you are.
It will see how these two evolve in high school. If Edward will abandon childhood interests. If new social opportunities (clubs, sports, etc.) will change who they are. Looking forward to more!
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