Clipped Wings and Inked Armor, Ch. 41

One thing that I have loved about your story from the start is that watching these scenes and lives play out, there is a glow always around the outside, and that glow is the care you take with your characters. Even in their darkest hour, you manage to write in this aura of protection around them. As a reader, I feel that they and myself are always cared for.

So, in this chapter when many of these people are forced to relive their worst nightmares, I felt cocooned in the love they all have for each other, and the love you have in writing them.