Deep Dish, Ch. 8
I really enjoyed Jacey's POV. I am not surprised by any of the emotion he expresses, but I love it coming from a voice that is distinctly his.
I was kind of surprised there were no lemons, but the tenor of the chapter makes it fine without it. Though you did hit us with the knowledge they did sleep together after the planetarium, it fits with Jacey's southern gentleman personality to not kiss & tell during his chapter, if you know what I mean.
I really enjoyed Jacey's POV. I am not surprised by any of the emotion he expresses, but I love it coming from a voice that is distinctly his.
I was kind of surprised there were no lemons, but the tenor of the chapter makes it fine without it. Though you did hit us with the knowledge they did sleep together after the planetarium, it fits with Jacey's southern gentleman personality to not kiss & tell during his chapter, if you know what I mean.
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