Beth Sabatino
Stolen Singer, Ch. 10

I don't want a teaser, but I still leave love.

I love the way you are writing Edward and Bella's relationship at this stage of the game. Edward is patient with Bella who needs a calm hand as she works to figure out this new life, and her new self. You have them, emotionally, very much the age they are (or the age they were frozen in time, as the case may be). You take me back to those scared teenage days when you were afraid to tell someone you liked them for fear of rejection. It's going to take a moment for someone to be brave.

I love the jesting at Edward's expense that Carlisle did. That made me smile. :)

Time is ticking for this family, yet they can't really rush Bella either.
Labels: edit post
0 Responses

Post a Comment