Beth Sabatino
Steamy Movie Crossover Contest
The Boy That Grew Up, o/s

What a sweet tale! I love this idea of Edward on the verge of manhood, returning to Neverland for one last goodbye. I always felt bad for Tinkerbell, because it was obvious that she loved Peter, though could never have him. I like your twist on her getting one moment to be big, and get a kiss before Edward left.

Then to find out that Bella had become every bit of a woman, with grown up needs and desires. I was curious how far you would take it, but alas, Canon Edward made his chivalrous appearance. :)

Very sweet tale.
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