New Boy Blues, Ch. 3

I love that these are real teenagers in your story. You write the awkwardness so well. I can see that Bella is either going to be a hindrance to Edward and Jasper coming together, because Edward will misconceive that they are a couple. OR Bella will be a help in befriending Edward, and therefore, act as a bridge between Edward and Jasper.

I have a feeling that this will be the first of many speedy accents home for Jasper. Ahhh...teenage infatuation. :)