Stolen Singer, Ch. 4
"So are we". So great.
I love that you had Bella launch herself at Jasper upon waking. That she was a face she remembered. I think it is good that Emmett was the one to remove her from the house, calm her down, and set her off on her first hunt. Carlisle would have been too wordy. Edward would have expected too much understanding and he has too much emotionally invested already. Rose too harsh. Alice too excited. Esme too soft. It had to be him. He is a straight shooter. Will tell it like it is w/out being harsh or uninformative. He will pace it well.
Poor Charlie having to call Renee. Bless the parents whose children go missing each year.
"So are we". So great.
I love that you had Bella launch herself at Jasper upon waking. That she was a face she remembered. I think it is good that Emmett was the one to remove her from the house, calm her down, and set her off on her first hunt. Carlisle would have been too wordy. Edward would have expected too much understanding and he has too much emotionally invested already. Rose too harsh. Alice too excited. Esme too soft. It had to be him. He is a straight shooter. Will tell it like it is w/out being harsh or uninformative. He will pace it well.
Poor Charlie having to call Renee. Bless the parents whose children go missing each year.
Post a Comment