Stranger Than Fiction, Ch. 10

What a way for Edward to discover all that his leaving did to Bella. To have everyone who knew her in that time hit him with all their memories all at once. I can't imagine how he would have dealt with it all if Alice and Jasper hadn't been there with him. He did have some forewarning that there were lingering feelings, and not all positive about their time together as he witnessed her destroying the slides in the bio room.

Then there is Bella. Sometimes when you are experiencing so many emotions, the only thing to do is to allow yourself some escape. Some people drink, Bella clears her mind through orgasm. I thought it was brilliant the way you shifted back and forth between her conscious memory of her last time with Thomas and her subconscious desire for it to be Edward.