The Lion and The Jackal, Ch. 14

My heart hurts, but I love that this is the direction you decided to take! All too often in fic, Edward can always be forgiven, no matter the transgressions. I love that you didn't go that route. Bella used Edward at the end of this chapter, because I am sure she wants him to feel as used and discarded as he made her feel. As much as it hurts to read such loss of love, such loss of faith and trust, I love that you did it.

I can't wait to see where we go from here!