Counterpoint, Ch. 25
I am attributing the feeling that this chapter came out of no where to your genius. That we are feeling the "What? There was no build up to this." same as Edward. Very well played.
The feeling of Edward's numbness hangs over the page. It is like the wall of cold you know is there that you can barely feel when standing in front of an open freezer. The fact that, after Mike refuses to send a retraction, he PISSES ON HIS BED, we know we are no longer in the room with the same sweet Edward we have grown to love. This is a man w/out feeling, w/out thought of repercussion.
Heart hurts.
I am attributing the feeling that this chapter came out of no where to your genius. That we are feeling the "What? There was no build up to this." same as Edward. Very well played.
The feeling of Edward's numbness hangs over the page. It is like the wall of cold you know is there that you can barely feel when standing in front of an open freezer. The fact that, after Mike refuses to send a retraction, he PISSES ON HIS BED, we know we are no longer in the room with the same sweet Edward we have grown to love. This is a man w/out feeling, w/out thought of repercussion.
Heart hurts.
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