Devil's Angel, Ch. 20
The tides certainly turned in this chapter! This chapter was so tender, physically and emotionally. Edward stripped himself bare emotionally for Bella. He might not have been able to say the three words that he realized equated what he felt for Bella, but she showed her with the beautiful evening, and the soft love making. I think the thing that really spoke volumes to how much he cares and trusts her is him opening up to her about his tattoo and parents.
I like that you still added the little twist of their kink in there too, because her desire and adventuring nature is an important part of why they work together.
My final thought as the chapter ended was what will this mean for all the work he has been doing with Jasper. Will he be willing to let go of his life long quest to bring his parents' killer to justice in order to settle into a calm life with Bella? Will he continue to pursue it and risk putting those he loves at risk? THAT I will be anxious to read.
The tides certainly turned in this chapter! This chapter was so tender, physically and emotionally. Edward stripped himself bare emotionally for Bella. He might not have been able to say the three words that he realized equated what he felt for Bella, but she showed her with the beautiful evening, and the soft love making. I think the thing that really spoke volumes to how much he cares and trusts her is him opening up to her about his tattoo and parents.
I like that you still added the little twist of their kink in there too, because her desire and adventuring nature is an important part of why they work together.
My final thought as the chapter ended was what will this mean for all the work he has been doing with Jasper. Will he be willing to let go of his life long quest to bring his parents' killer to justice in order to settle into a calm life with Bella? Will he continue to pursue it and risk putting those he loves at risk? THAT I will be anxious to read.
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